ارجو التصحيح من اساتذة الانجليزية ثالثة ثانوي

عنوان الموضوع : ارجو التصحيح من اساتذة الانجليزية ثالثة ثانوي
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[LEFT][/LEFT] i went with agroup of tourist on plant Mars which is planet of solar system and it is not far to the solar so it is very hart .it is called * the red planet *.. moreover no inhabitants in Mars because no water and no food and boring life no leisure and form off life ..........................
in conclution . this vacontion is bad and it is no nice places to visit.....................


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i went with a group of tourists to the plant Mars which is a planet in the solar system. It is not far from the solar; thus, it is very hot .it is called * the red planet *, moreover there is no inhabitants in Mars because there exist no water, no food, it is a boring life no leisure and off form life ..........................
in conclusion . this vacontion is bad and it is not a nice places to visit

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>>>> الرد الثاني :

ارجوكم اريد تصحيح لاخطائي ارجوكم

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