paragraph about child labour بكالوريا ادبي

عنوان الموضوع : paragraph about child labour بكالوريا ادبي
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Millions of children all over the world are being exploited by unscrupulous business and businessmen children are found performing hazardous takes in the mines, in the factories and in agricultural areas, as a result, they are effected morally, physically and mentally.
It’s high time to eradicate this phenomenon, so, some measures must be taken. Firstly, citizens must be sensitized on souriousuess of this social’ ill in order to prevent criminal organization from exploiting these innocent creatures. This can be done thought the media, T.V debate newspaper article, radio warning, and magazine report; secondly sums of money should be collected by cultural association in order to help poor children psychologically and financially. So they will be able to have access to education and be easily integrated in the society ; thirdly, strict lows must be passed to punish business, practicing child labour and irresponsible parents as well; Consequently, unethical businesses had batter stop exploiting children and work in transparency. Finally; children’s rights must be defended by international organizations UNICEF and UNESCO.
To conclude, I think that eradication this social’ ill is not only the responsibly of the authorities, but, it is also the concerer of every citizen.



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>>>> الرد الأول :

من فضلكم أن تصححو لي الخطأ إن وجد
(رحم الله عبدا أهدى لي عيوبي )

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>>>> الرد الثاني :

هذي من عندك خويا

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>>>> الرد الثالث :

thank you 2 much

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>>>> الرد الرابع :

it is very good paragraph...but there are some simple mistake in it for example instead of (millions) more of than millions..... (all over the world) it will be better to say that in all over the world

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>>>> الرد الخامس :

Thank u nice paragraph

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ششكككررررررررررا

you can say in all the world it's better
you can change therdily by than or and
read you're paragraple again than we will find you're mistakes
thanks my bro

هاي ليك فقرة مليحة
Child labour is the worst from of child exploitation. It is widespread all over the world. About seventy-three million children belonging to the age group of ten to fourteen years are engaged in child labour all over the globe. Illiteracy of the parents, large families, need of additional income and poverty are the chief causes of the exploitation of child labour. Parents are indirectly responsible for this. Childhood is the foundation of one’s career. At this stage, children should be sent to schools, not to work. Child labour lowers the wage rates of adult labourers. Employers exploit children due to their docile nature and their willingness to do monotonous jobs. They face health problems. Several programmes have been undertaken both at the national and international level to check and stop this practice. The people should also help the government in its efforts to tackle this problem.

بارك الله فيييييك

.................................................. ..merci.........................................

nice paragraph i'll do one and share it too inshalah good ideas thanks a lot

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ameura https://3andlib.xplainer.net/images/...s/viewpost.gif هاي ليك فقرة مليحة Child labour is the worst from of child exploitation. It is widespread all over the world. About seventy-three million children belonging to the age group of ten to fourteen years are engaged in child labour all over the globe. Illiteracy of the parents, large families, need of additional income and poverty are the chief causes of the exploitation of child labour. Parents are indirectly responsible for this. Childhood is the foundation of one’s career. At this stage, children should be sent to schools, not to work. Child labour lowers the wage rates of adult labourers. Employers exploit children due to their docile nature and their willingness to do monotonous jobs. They face health problems. Several programmes have been undertaken both at the national and international level to check and stop this practice. The people should also help the government in its efforts to tackle this problem.

;merciii amoura