your own poem

[amira]

عنوان الموضوع : your own poem
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hey guys...hope you are all ok
well i had this idea at school today
a lot of students have a patient in writing poems in english or even songs
so any one want to share with us his idea or poem just write it here
i'm wating for you
hope you like this idea
thanks...


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>>>> الرد الأول :

i will start this is just a trail ok so...
Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?

Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?

Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?

Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.

It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.

It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.

No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.

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>>>> الرد الثاني :

hey girl l
so whats up
well its good idea ....im looking 4 a song and i will write it to u wheni find it
and thn x 4 the song

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>>>> الرد الثالث :

Oh, my life is changing everyday
In every possible way
And my dreams it's never quiet as it seems
Never quiet as it seems

I know I've felt like this before
But now I'm feeling it even more
Because it came from you
And then I open up and see
The person falling here is me
A different way to be

I want more, impossible to ignore

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>>>> الرد الرابع :

And now I tell you openly
You have my heart so don't hurt me
You're what I couldn't find
A totally amazing mind
So understanding and so kind
You're everything to me

Oh, my life is changing every day
In every possible way
And my dreams it's never quiet as it seems
'Cause you're a dream to me, dream to me

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>>>> الرد الخامس :

this is the best see
I can almost see it
That dream I am dreaming
But there's a voice inside my head saying
"You'll never reach it"

Every step I'm taking
Every move I make feels
Lost with no direction
My faith is shaking

But I gotta keep trying
Gotta keep my head held high

There's always gonna be another mountain
I'm always gonna wanna make it move
Always gonna be a uphill battle
Sometimes I'm gonna have to lose

Ain't about how fast I get there
Ain't about what's waiting on the other side
It's the climb

The struggles I'm facing
The chances I'm taking
Sometimes might knock me down
But no, I'm not breaking

I may not know it
But these are the moments that
I'm gonna remember most, yeah
Just gotta keep going

And I, I got to be strong
Just keep pushing on

'Cause there's always gonna be another mountain
I'm always gonna wanna make it move
Always gonna be a uphill battle
Sometimes I'm gonna have to lose

Ain't about how fast I get there
Ain't about what's waiting on the other side
It's the climb, yeah!

There's always gonna be another mountain
I'm always gonna wanna make it move
Always gonna be an uphill battle
Somebody's gonna have to lose

Ain't about how fast I get there
Ain't about what's waiting on the other side
It's the climb, yeah!

Keep on moving, keep climbing
Keep the faith, baby
It's all about, it's all about the climb
Keep the faith, keep your faith

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مالكس لقبايلي hey girl l so whats up well its good idea ....im looking 4 a song and i will write it to u wheni find it and thn x 4 the song

if you need a song i can help you just give me the subject lol

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hakimasmeth this is the best see I can almost see it That dream I am dreaming But there's a voice inside my head saying "You'll never reach it" Every step I'm taking Every move I make feels Lost with no direction My faith is shaking But I gotta keep trying Gotta keep my head held high There's always gonna be another mountain I'm always gonna wanna make it move Always gonna be a uphill battle Sometimes I'm gonna have to lose Ain't about how fast I get there Ain't about what's waiting on the other side It's the climb The struggles I'm facing The chances I'm taking Sometimes might knock me down But no, I'm not breaking I may not know it But these are the moments that I'm gonna remember most, yeah Just gotta keep going And I, I got to be strong Just keep pushing on 'Cause there's always gonna be another mountain I'm always gonna wanna make it move Always gonna be a uphill battle Sometimes I'm gonna have to lose Ain't about how fast I get there Ain't about what's waiting on the other side It's the climb, yeah! There's always gonna be another mountain I'm always gonna wanna make it move Always gonna be an uphill battle Somebody's gonna have to lose Ain't about how fast I get there Ain't about what's waiting on the other side It's the climb, yeah! Keep on moving, keep climbing Keep the faith, baby It's all about, it's all about the climb Keep the faith, keep your faith

this is a song named the climb by miley cyrus
but thanks any way

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hakimasmeth And now I tell you openly You have my heart so don't hurt me You're what I couldn't find A totally amazing mind So understanding and so kind You're everything to me Oh, my life is changing every day In every possible way And my dreams it's never quiet as it seems 'Cause you're a dream to me, dream to me

this one is amazing i loved it

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hakimasmeth Oh, my life is changing everyday In every possible way And my dreams it's never quiet as it seems Never quiet as it seems I know I've felt like this before But now I'm feeling it even more Because it came from you And then I open up and see The person falling here is me A different way to be I want more, impossible to ignore

i loved that one amazingggg

thank u girl

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة hakimasmeth thank u girl

with no thanks that is my job

rock girl nice to meet u really i want some day why not now

where are you
come on give me what you are capable of

looooooooooooooooooool