عنوان الموضوع : تقـــدر تســـاعد ... ؟ !! ادخـــل ساعدنا و لا تبخـــل علينـــا ... ~ للثانية ثانوي
مقدم من طرف منتديات العندليب

الســــــــلام عليـــكم و رحمـــة الله تعـــالى و بركـــــــــاتـــه ....

وكـــما لاحـــظت في الآونـــة الاخيــــرة معظـــم الشبـــاب خـــلص الامتحـــانـــات ... انا مازال مــا بديتـــش ... غدوااا نبداو ان شاء الله ... و كمـــا رايتـــم انا احـتـــاج مساعدة في :

كتــــابة فقـــرة حول :

Describe a disaster you have witnessed in your life

و حول :

بـــــــــــــــــــــلاد الاندلـــــــس

انااااا اعـــلم ان معظمكـــم يملـــك الاجـــابة فلا تبخـــلوااا عليـــناااا ... تقدر تمــد الاضافة عاوناااا .. و جزاكم الله خيـــراااا ... ~


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>>>> الرد الأول :

بحثت وبحثت وهذا ما وجدت
فقرة جميلة وملخصة ولكن بسيطة نوعا ما

One night my sleep was suddenly disturbed by shouts of fire. I ran out of my house to find out what had happened.

I then saw a four-storeyed building on fire. Many people were screaming inside the building, and many were rushing out of it. Two women were so desperate that they tried to jump down through the windows; but they were pulled back by others inside the building.

Soon three fire-engines arrived, and the fire men began to work immediately. They threw a lot of water on to the building with the hoses of the fire-engines.

At last, after several hours, the fire was put out. By now some people were already burnt to death. Others were in a state of shock.

Soon two ambulances arrived and took the dead and the injured to the hospital. The police too arrived shortly to do what was necessary.

I felt very sad after this incident.


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>>>> الرد الثاني :

شكـــــــــرااا اختـــــــــي ... صغيـــرة و ملخـــصة ... فقرة جيدة ... شكـــرااا جزاك الله خيــراااا ... ~ .. نطلب الافادى ايضــا من الاعضاء الآخريــن

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>>>> الرد الثالث :

العفو اخي
لاشكر على واجب
سررت جدا لانها افادتك

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>>>> الرد الخامس :


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