و عليكم السلام صديقي !!
ممكن أساعدك
شوف مثلا في المقدمة, يمكنك مثلا البداية بالتالي
For me, last years was one from the best scholar years that I ever studied and it was full of surprises....
المهم==u can separate this idea and write whatever u want in this field...and don't override 3 lines
و بعدها ... ندخل إلى العرض واللي يتطلب منا إنو نتعمق في فكرتنا...و ذلك بواسطة إعطاء إمثلة عن ما فعلته السنة الماضية و إنطباعاتك...... لأنه نص ذاتي لا موضوعي
مثلا مممم---
The 1st AS was the most tiresome year... I have worked hard and didn't sleep many nights...
I've been shoked and sometimes happy for several times ...
In the 1st trimestre, I shoked due of the average. because most of us where expecting that they'll get more than that...
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و في الأخير... تأتي الخاتمة
Indeed!! It was a perfect scholar year...when I formulated my basics for my Baccalaureat, and I've made many unforgettable friends...